The following paragraphs are from the reviewer's reports on our paper: Title: An Integrative Computational Model of Multiciliary Beating Authors: X. Yang, R. H. Dillon and L. Fauci This interesting and well written report makes significant progress in achieving a practical model of multiple cilia interacting in a viscous fluid field. It has the distinct advantage over alternate published models of cilia in that the cilia itself is constructed of mechanical elements that can be easily adapted to test mechanisms of internal functioning of the cilium as well as evaluating the viscous interactions with the external environment. The authors make a strong case that the model can simulate several observable behaviors of real cilia, such as synchronization and development of metachrony. A definite strength of the current report is that it very conscientiously reviews the relevant literature and places the current work accurately in the development of the field. Very few of the papers on this subject take such a global view of the current state of knowledge in the field. ---------------------------------------------- I like the new synchronization function they devised to compare the degree of synchrony between two flagella, I think that adds to the paper and will be a useful tool in the future. ---------------------------------------------- a mpeg movie link about this synchrony function: http://www.ccs.tulane.edu/~xyang4/movies/syn-metachrony/ the synchronization function was inspired by a discussion with Lisa Fauci and Ricardo Cortez on a Friday afternoon, and a paper Bob Dillon reminded us. The authors would thank the anonymous referees for their questions and suggestions. The computation of the above simulation was conducted on CCS AMD cluster, and the mpeg movie was created by MATLAB.